Wilt,your paintings are very good,but I would have put the smoke trailing behind that way the moment you view the painting yer eye would not be drawn immediatly to the smoke.
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You as an artist should know that a distraction in a painting can cause it to confuse the viewers perception of whats going on.
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perhaps you'd prefer this one (its correct by your estimation).
Its not about correctiveness its about harmonizing with the rest of the painting.
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